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Student Arrested for Writing Essay 890

mcgrew writes "The Chicago Tribune reports that an eighteen year old straight-A High School student was arrested for writing an essay that 'disturbed' his teacher. Even though no threats were made to a specific person, 18 year-old Allen Lee's English teacher convened a panel to discuss the work. As a result of that discussion, the police were called in. 'The youth's father said his son was not suspended or expelled but was forced to attend classes elsewhere for now. Today, Cary-Grove students rallied behind the arrested teen by organizing a petition drive to let him back in their school. They posted on walls quotes from the English teacher in which she had encouraged students to express their emotions through writing.'"
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  • by ellem ( 147712 ) * <{moc.liamg} {ta} {25melle}> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:12PM (#18902767) Homepage Journal
    On the off chance the kid is a nut job I guess you need to check him out. I'm not sure you need to arrest him....
  • Overreactions (Score:3, Insightful)

    by soft_guy ( 534437 ) * on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:14PM (#18902809)
    I think the various over-reactions to the VaTech tragedy are sad. For example, this and also Yale banning stage weapons. I wonder what was in the essay that made the teacher go bonkers. I guess she should have told her students just to write about fluffy clouds and easter bunny.
  • Understandable? (Score:3, Insightful)

    by darjen ( 879890 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:15PM (#18902839)
    In the aftermath of recent events, such paranoia can be understandable. But then again, even in normal circumstances, I wouldn't expect anything more from the public school system.
  • by tomstdenis ( 446163 ) <tomstdenis@gma[ ]com ['il.' in gap]> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:16PM (#18902859) Homepage
    Agreed, but there is a level of sensitivity you use in such situations. Of course when I was in school and on the one occasion I wrote something mildly depressing I was told to basically "walk it off." At that point I don't even remember why I was depressed but it was a short lived spell.

    Of course how many of these "depressed kids" [myself included in that instant] are just bored and looking for attention, I wonder.

    in this case would it have been so hard to pull the kid aside with the parents and ask what's up? Instead of going all omgbbq!!!!111oneCRAZIES over it?

    Tom
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:16PM (#18902861)
    I want to read the essay and judge for myself.
  • by eln ( 21727 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:16PM (#18902863)
    FTA:
    Disorderly conduct, which carries a penalty of 30 days in jail and a $1,500 fine, is filed for pranks such as pulling a fire alarm or dialing 911. But it can also apply when someone's writings can disturb an individual, Delelio said

    If this is true, then the disorderly conduct statute should be declared unconstitutional. If writing something that could disturb any random individual (without directly threatening that individual) is an arrestable offense, then the very idea of free speech is pretty much out the window. After all, if the First Amendment isn't there to protect possibly disturbing speech, what is it there for?
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:17PM (#18902881)
    Write a "disturbing story" -> arrest
    Write a "dissenting article" -> arrest
    Write a "criticism of a politician" -> arrest
    Write to expose high crimes of those in power -> arrest

    --
    Side topic:

    By the way, ever notice the people's solution to every problem is always arrest?
  • by Mr. Underbridge ( 666784 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:18PM (#18902901)
    You know, having a sample of the actual text might help in allowing readers to see what the hell is going on. Without that, it's hard to judge, but I'd say there probably isn't a chance in hell these charges stick at trial, and pretty much certainly not at appeal assuming it made it that far.
  • really ridiculous (Score:1, Insightful)

    by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:20PM (#18902953)
    I have a BA in English...This sort of BS really makes me angry. The student had every right to express his feelings in writing. To write something doesn't mean you are going to do it.
  • by Marxist Hacker 42 ( 638312 ) * <seebert42@gmail.com> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:21PM (#18902983) Homepage Journal
    Given the lack of what I would consider an adequate response (which to me wouldn't have been an arrest, but rather a referal for counseling and a flag against buying weapons in the state gun background check database) they just might- by this very kid.
  • Re:Understandable? (Score:3, Insightful)

    by Jarjarthejedi ( 996957 ) <christianpinch@g ... om minus painter> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:22PM (#18902999) Journal
    I'm afraid I have to agree. It's not like this is something out of left field, I for one was expecting something like this to happen. I'm honestly surprised it took this long after the VT shooting for this to happen, I was expecting a wave the next day or something. With the media playing up his 'disturbing' writing, which is really no more disturbing than many Hollywood thrillers, and blaming it for his problems it's understandable that another student's 'disturbing' writing would lead to something like this.

    Stuff like this will always happen after a tragedy until people realize that reality is not digital, no single thing can ever be pointed to as a blame or conclusive evidence that something bad is going to happen. Blaming video games, movies, rock and roll, Harry Potter, or 'disturbing' writing is pointless, none of that ever made anyone who they are or caused anything on it's own.
  • by nate nice ( 672391 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:23PM (#18903031) Journal
    The story points to them being a "straight A student". What does this have to do with anything? Are they implying that a persons GPA is an indicator of their abilities to shoot others at school?

    Just what was the point of that?
  • by icepick72 ( 834363 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:24PM (#18903067)
    The USA is becoming a state of fear, evidenced by such happenings. Fear causes the reactions to become more and more inappropriate. I really don't know whose fault it is or where it will end. The country that promotes freedom is losing it fast but it's hard to see from the inside. I assume at some point in the next 50 years the word "freedom" will have been completely redefined but it will have happened so slower that nobody knows.
  • by CruddyBuddy ( 918901 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:24PM (#18903077)
    It would appear that the teacher should be arrested - not the student. The student was only doing as instructed.

    But a civil rights advocate said the teacher's reaction to an essay shouldn't make it a crime. "One of the elements is that some sort of disorder or disruption is created," said Ed Yohnka, a spokesman for the American Civil Liberties Union of Illinois. "When something is done in private--when a paper is handed in to a teacher--there isn't a disruption."
    This didn't become a disturbance or disruption until the teacher made it one.
  • by Lil'wombat ( 233322 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:27PM (#18903131)
    According to a Chicago Tribune Article today, the assignment directions were to write stream of consciousness and to not judge or filter your writing.

    Seems to me this was a smart kid playing games with a stupid touchy feely assignment for a blow-off class his senior year.

    Should the kid have been referred to a counselor? Sure.

    Should the kids parents been contacted? Absolutely.

    Arrested because his thoughts are disturbing? No.

  • Re:Understandable? (Score:2, Insightful)

    by Shippy ( 123643 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:28PM (#18903155)
    Um, I can't help but think you're leaving something out of this story. It just doesn't sound plausible.
  • by waldonova ( 769039 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:28PM (#18903175)
    A good point, but where does the law even fit into this? Having a psychotic break isn't illegal. If he did snap, then wouldn't he be considered unfit to face the charges? You don't defend society by jailing an essay writer, you do it by getting a psychiatric evaluation on someone that you have reason to believe will crack. If they are troubled, get them help.

    The teachers did the right thing by being cautious and that shouldn't be discouraged. Perhaps some refining of the "what to do when we think we have a problem kid" procedure would be beneficial.
  • Re:Understandable? (Score:1, Insightful)

    by Marxist Hacker 42 ( 638312 ) * <seebert42@gmail.com> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:28PM (#18903177) Homepage Journal
    What gets me about this isn't the paranoia; the paranoia is justified in view of recent events.

    What disturbs me is the utter lack of an appropriate response. It's almost as bad as the 1970s Catholic Bishop response to a peadophile priest: bring him in, talk to him, censor him for a bit, then reassign him to a new location to offend again.

    That's basically what they did with this kid- arrested him, charged him, released him to a new school where nobody knows him or how to deal with his insecurities.

    That is UTTERLY the wrong solution. I'd settle for- no arrest, referal to mental health professionals, keep the kid with his friends so he has an outlet for his feelings, and give him his very own entry in the state gun control lookup database to prevent him from legally buying a firearm. The 2nd and 3rd parts are more important than the 1st and the 4th- but ALL need to happen given recent events. The arrest probably accomplishes #4 at best- and leaves #2 and #3 completely undone.
  • by scenestar ( 828656 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:30PM (#18903207) Homepage Journal
    One of my friends spent a fair amount of time in juvenile hall after his school dean had him arrested for destruction of property with malicious intent.

    What actually happened was that he snapped another student's pencil.

    the USA's legal system is broken beyond repair.
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    by account_deleted ( 4530225 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:32PM (#18903261)
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  • by MMaestro ( 585010 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:33PM (#18903299)
    Face it, this is happening simply because of Virginia Tech. Schools have become (more) paranoid of students so ANYONE that writes an essay, a story, a letter, draws a picture, makes a movie, makes a comment that could possibly lead to violence down the line will get you picked up by the authorities. I don't like it personally, but thats what happening.

    My friend had a similar situation happen to him after the Columbine High School shooting. He made up a death-list and talked about it to friends and other students in school PRIOR to Columbine. After Columbine, he was picked up by the school administrators and police and spent several days in consoling until they decided that he wasn't serious.

  • by UncleTogie ( 1004853 ) * on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:33PM (#18903313) Homepage Journal

    I assume at some point in the next 50 years the word "freedom" will have been completely redefined but it will have happened so slower that nobody knows.

    Just ask George Orwell; 1984 discusses exactly how the word "freedom" will change.
  • by endianx ( 1006895 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:33PM (#18903315)
    Yep. Just like boiling a frog [wikipedia.org].
  • by gfxguy ( 98788 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:34PM (#18903329)
    It doesn't matter what the essay says; he couldv'e written about plucking his teacher's eyes out for all I care. He did what the teacher asked him to do, and nobody - NOBODY should be arrested for writing an essay, no matter inflamatory or disturbing it might be.

    There are other courses of action to deal with it when someone is obviously disturbed, but really, no matter what he wrote, no matter how vile or stomach turning, it doesn't prove he's even unstable - it only proves he knows how to write to nauseate people.

    I mean, have you seen Resevoir Dogs? Would you have had Quentin Tarantino's teacher's put him in a padded cell?

  • by drinkypoo ( 153816 ) <drink@hyperlogos.org> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:34PM (#18903333) Homepage Journal

    Of course how many of these "depressed kids" [myself included in that instant] are just bored and looking for attention, I wonder.

    I can't speak for anyone else, but I was disruptive because I was bored and looking for attention.

    I was depressed because I was bullied, because you are not permitted to be an individual in school.

    And when I was kicked out of a school for finally getting in an actual fight and winning, instead of just being casually punched and kicked, or having things stolen from me, or having my bicycle destroyed in the mandatory-use bike rack, I was depressed because it was proof that the system was not there to educate me - I was an inconvenience to them and they were working to eliminate me.

    Kids who aren't depressed by school are the ones with something wrong with them.

  • by Pax00 ( 266436 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:36PM (#18903375)
    I find this article disturbing.

    The author should be arrested.

    I find the behavior of the school board disturbing, they should be arrested.

    I find the fact that you are reading this disturbing, you should be arrested.

    the fact that I am writing this i find disturbing, I should be arrested.

  • by drinkypoo ( 153816 ) <drink@hyperlogos.org> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:37PM (#18903401) Homepage Journal

    I'm sure it can't be /absolutely/ true, otherwise you could, for example, end up with 20 people who find your Slashdot post 'disturbing' (sounds like a personal judgement to me) and you're up on twenty counts of disorderly conduct ;-)

    You mean just like how the standard for sexual harassment is supposed to be that a reasonable person would find it to be offensive, but the actual standard is whether the so-called victim finds it offensive?

    I just like to bring the sexual harassment laws up occasionally because they are sexist against men. Classic overcorrection. The legal system is in general biased against men, in fact, starting with the cops who let women go more than they let men go (after a traffic stop) and it continues through various other aspects; for instance, hunting down deadbeat dads is big business, but deadbeat moms? Good luck...

  • Re:The Essay? (Score:2, Insightful)

    by ubuwalker31 ( 1009137 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:37PM (#18903403)
    "as a teacher, don't be surprised on inspiring the first CG shooting,"

    "Blood, sex and booze. Drugs, drugs, drugs are fun. Stab, stab, stab, stab, stab, s...t...a...b..., puke. So I had this dream last night where I went into a building, pulled out two P 90s and started shooting everyone, then had sex with the dead bodies. Well, not really, but it would be funny if I did."

    This kid was correctly removed from the classroom. He should be examined by psychiatrists and a judgment should be made as to his mental health and well-being. If he is not a danger to anyone, he should be allowed back. This decision shouldn't be left to school officials, but to qualified medical professions.

    That being said, this kid sounds like a fuckin nut job.
  • by EatHam ( 597465 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:38PM (#18903439)
    You didn't even read the article, did you?
  • by tomstdenis ( 446163 ) <tomstdenis@gma[ ]com ['il.' in gap]> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:39PM (#18903445) Homepage
    I was similarly an outsider in school. While I generally "got along" with people in the sense we were polite, I was often the target of jokes, and other shit. Mostly because I didn't subscribe to pop culture to the same degree, I didn't wear expensive nike shoes, or really dig GnR (any 8 year old who claims to get it is lying anyways), etc...

    Of course I was also fairly well occupied outside of school. I was in Air Cadets, went out with the few friends I had, played music, and was a general all around PC hacker.

    I think the trick to surviving school is to think, as I did, that school is a small part of your life and 1 second after you grad from high school it's all over anyways. It's been 7 years since I left school and I have yet to meet any of them again, even though I still live in the same town.

    It's the kids who put too much stock into their station in school life that get wicked depressed when they're not part of the cool clique.

    Tom
  • Re:Understandable? (Score:3, Insightful)

    by Chr0me ( 180627 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:39PM (#18903467)
    Are you serious? He free wrote a work of fiction (that'd be the "creative" part of creative writing), by your logic the following people should sent to a shrink for what they've written as works of fiction: Stephen King, Shakespear, Milton, Anne Rice, Kathy Reichs, Robert Rodriguez, Quentin Tarantino, Mario Puzo, Homer, myself, and just about every other person who has put pen to paper for the purpose of creating entertainment (published or unpublished).
  • Re:The Essay? (Score:3, Insightful)

    by Lane.exe ( 672783 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:39PM (#18903469) Homepage
    That counts as part of an essay? I mean, I don't think it's indicative of a violent personality. If we want to stretch this (spurious) VT shooting connection, look at the differences between what Cho wrote and what this guy wrote. Lee's "essay," or the excerpt, contains violent imagery but it's hardly even coherent. Something like "Richard McBeef" is much more coherent as a whole and indicates some serious interpersonal issues.

    Maybe Lee really did have that dream; it's a disturbing enough dream, but how many of us don't have disturbing or even violent dreams? His reaction to it -- "it would be funny if I did" is far too vague. Let the kid talk to a psychologist. He's a teenager. I'm sure all teens could benefit from a few good therapy sessions.

  • by FooAtWFU ( 699187 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:44PM (#18903575) Homepage
    I got a taste of San Francisco values when I visited and saw the Lunar New Year parade. There were people from the Falun Gong who would have liked to have marched in the parade, but they were not allowed. The reasons for this essentially were a) sucking up to the Chinese lobby and b) sucking it up to the Gay lobby (since the group condemns homosexuality). There were some quotes of officials, I think, making ludicrous comparisons about how letting them march would be like letting the KKK march in the Martin Luther King Day parade. (I think I could make a better case for it being like Martin Luther King marching at the KKK rally... though that's not really the case; we haven't seen, for example, anyone nailed to an upside-down cross and set on fire, on either side...)

    Sadly, actions really don't really speak louder than words where Special Interest Politics are concerned, and so the San Francisco status quo can continue to market itself with terms like "compassion, tolerance, respect". But I would remind those people that it's not really tolerance if you agree with the people you're Tolerating. And, to bring the discussion back to the article, it's not really free speech if you can't write disturbing, mean, or hateful things.

  • by ktappe ( 747125 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:46PM (#18903617)

    The story points to them being a "straight A student". What does this have to do with anything?
    I was going to say the exact opposite. It seems to me the fact that he's a straight-A student should have made the school realize this guy was not the loose cannon that Cho was. Cho was deeply anti-establishment and his rantings show a hatred for conformists. It's pretty hard to be anti-establishment and non-conformist and still get straight-A's, for to get them you must follow all your teachers' and school's rules to the letter.
  • Misconception... (Score:2, Insightful)

    by Notquitecajun ( 1073646 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:47PM (#18903655)
    Also, doesn't the US have a constitution which makes freedom of expression an absolute right? "or abridging the freedom of speech" is from the first amendment. The US Constitution doesn't "make" freedom of expression a right, it ASSUMES that it is ALREADY a right that we already have and then protects it. There's a difference.
  • Re:The Essay? (Score:5, Insightful)

    by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:48PM (#18903663)
    Because of what he wrote? If we start locking up and examining every person for what they write, we will be in a sad society. I have written some pretty "disturbing" things in my life, but I have never had anyone question my sanity. Some of my pieces have even been published, where not just a few school administrators saw them, but at a minimum tens of thousands of people read them.

    I distinctly remember a poem I wrote, where I described in first person the sensation and thoughts of a person committing suicide by jumping. Even my own mother looked at me like I was nuts, and we all joked about how someone might say something, but nothing came of it. People never questioned my motivation or the writing. You know there is this quote attributed to Sigmund Freud, "Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar."

    I hope the criminal charges against him get dismissed and that he returns to school to complete his senior year. It seems pretty obvious to me that there is a great potential that the decision they made was both racial and reactionary. Neither of which are right.
  • by SmallFurryCreature ( 593017 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:48PM (#18903669) Journal

    Before that day a new record was set by a young man. By a young a man who had submitted stories and plays that disturbed his teachers but who took no action.

    What if they had?

    Well, off course if they had then the shooting would not have happened so those teachers would have been totally out of order for doing something.

    The job of the police is to stop crime. No it isn't. The job of the police is to arrest people AFTER they committed a crime. As Terry Pratchett put in a recent Discworld novel "we caught the guy that done it" sounds a lot better then "we caught the guy that looked like he was going to do it" especially if they say "prove it".

    BUT that doesn't help much when you got 30 dead.

    Saying that those people paid the price of freedom is NOT going to win you any friends.

    One /.er posted a link with a small segment of the essay. It seems to me like the typical emo/teenage kid rant. Personally I think hanging is to good for them but sadly I am not the judge.

    The point is however that this happened right after a tragedy wich might have been prevented. Do you want to be the person who ignores the warning signs next time? In the the U Sue of All (man that would have my english teacher calling in the special forces)?

    But we don't know the whole essay. Most police officers are rather down to earth, they KNOW the world. For them to make an arrest and for it not to be all settled easily alarms me. Slashdot happily tells us that this guy is a straight-A student. That is great because we all know straight-A students do NOT flip out. What I want to know is this, did the police check him out and what the fuck did they find?

    Why doesn't slashdot reportd exactly how many guns this person owns (whatever the number may be and remember, zero is an important number) and how many kilo's of ammo he has stockpiled (again remember the humble zero).

    Freedom and the prevention of crime do NOT mix. Since most want both, you are going to have conflicts.

  • by hey! ( 33014 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:50PM (#18903717) Homepage Journal
    And of course, not surprisingly given the news from VA Tech, disturbing things were on his mind.

    If a teacher does not know his or her students well enough to deal with whatever comes out of a free association exercise, that teacher has no business giving that kind of assignment. And as far as the state attorney bringing charges, hasnt Florida had enough political embarassment this decade?

    The other thing I don't understand is why the teacher read the assignment. Is she this kid's psychoanalyst? Yeah, you do free association as a creative exercise, to loosen up your mental censor so you can find material you wouldn't have found. You then pick over whatever you find to get ideas to write about. You're not supposed to turn in this stuff. It's an invasion of privacy. Nobody has any right to demand an inspection of whatever is in another person's head.
  • by JudgeFurious ( 455868 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:51PM (#18903725)
    I think that's just a universal truth. I'm over twenty years out of high school and I could have written some or all of both the preceeding posts. I cam to the same conclusion too. I am still in touch with one person from my graduating class and could locate maybe 5 of them. It's the most trivial four years you'll of your life and the only problem is that at the time it's taking place you can't see it.
  • by MightyYar ( 622222 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:52PM (#18903741)

    He made up a death-list and talked about it to friends...
    Holy shit!
  • by wurp ( 51446 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:54PM (#18903783) Homepage
    The US as far as I know has never been a free country. Certainly it hasn't in the last 70 years.

    Why can the government tell me who or how many people I can marry?
    Why can the government tell me what plants I can grow?
    Why can the government tell me what substances I can own?
    Why can the government tell me how (or if) I should dress?
    Why can the government tell two consenting adults what they can do together, or whether they can charge one another for it?
    Why can the government tell me what countries I can visit?

    I don't know of anywhere that I would really call free, and I am thankful for the freedoms I have. I am also watchful of the freedoms that are guaranteed to me but seem to be slipping. But I would love to see someplace that was really free.

    Another 'offtopic' moderation coming my way, I'm sure...
  • Re:Overreactions (Score:5, Insightful)

    by computational super ( 740265 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:55PM (#18903787)
    I wonder what was in the essay that made the teacher go bonkers.

    Ah, but you're missing the point of censorship - you see, once something has been censored, nobody can see it. If we could see it, we'd have to use our own common sense and judgment to determine if it was actually harmful or not. That's not only hard work, it might even lead to the wrong conclusions - you may end up disagreeing with the Powerful Ones as to whether or not it needed to be censored. Plus, children might see it! As anybody who's never spent any actual time with an actual child knows, children have minds more fragile than Tiffany glass which can be irreparably, irreversibly destroyed by the slightest immoral thought at any time.

    Rational subjective judgment and censorship can't coexist; we have to throw one out. Clearly, censorship is the lesser of the two evils.

  • by tomstdenis ( 446163 ) <tomstdenis@gma[ ]com ['il.' in gap]> on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:55PM (#18903793) Homepage
    Yup. Though I think college is a bit diff. While there still are "cliques" usually they only exist in the "popular" students who usually flush out by 2nd or 3rd year anyways. I still keep in touch with a couple of college buddies but mostly because we ended up with the same tastes in games/movies/beer.

    Of course it doesn't help that the media hypes up the existence of the school life. "So then like brittany totally dated john, but john was like totally into jane, but ..." WHO GIVES A SHIT?

    Admittedly, what little of american schools I've seen they're different from us cannuck schools. More emphasis on being the "captain of the sports team" and all that jazz. While we have sports here, and amongst the sports fans there are popular folk and all that shit, in the grand scheme of things it doesn't matter. We don't have packed stadiums to watch 14 year olds toss a football around, etc.

    Tom
  • What a great idea. Everyone should keep all of their angst and emotion to themselves. Pent up rage has never resulted in anything detrimental.

    Besides that, the jist of your post seems to be, "Just be normal! And if you can't force yourself (i.e. dumb yourself down enough) to think like the masses, just act like you do anyway. Waste your life away being a passive "me-too"-er who never questions the status-quo or gets emotional about anything. It's fun to try to fit in! The majority of America does it, so you might as well do it too, right?"

    If you really believe that line of bullshit, then there's not much anyone can do for you. Just go turn your television back on, get another beer, and stop trying to think.
  • by Odin_Tiger ( 585113 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:58PM (#18903853) Journal
    Writing something disturbing is enough to cost you your right to own a gun? Wow...I sure hope Stephen King and Quentin Tarantino aren't avid hunters.
  • by moeinvt ( 851793 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @01:59PM (#18903857)
    >Also, doesn't the US have a constitution which makes freedom of expression an absolute right?
    >>Yes, but that does not exempt you from the consequences of exercising that right.

    That's ridiculous! It's obviously not a "Right" if the government can throw you in prison for exercising it!
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:01PM (#18903895)

    Kids who aren't depressed by school are the ones with something wrong with them.

    Sing it, emo boy.
  • Re:The Essay? (Score:5, Insightful)

    by _bug_ ( 112702 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:01PM (#18903905) Journal
    That being said, this kid sounds like a fuckin nut job.

    Excellent knee-jerk reaction for someone having absolutely no context for the writing.

    If you made judgement on the writing alone, all of 4chan would be in jail. Look, the kid could have written it specifically to see how the teacher would react, he could have written it to explore things that disturb him in a manner that is safe, he could have been writing it as a joke, or perhaps he wrote it specifically to be disturbing and to invoke that feeling in the reader. Isn't part of art (whether it's writing, painting, sculpture, whatever) to invoke emotion in the reader/viewer?

    Your kind of reaction, done with very limited information on the situation, is a perfect example of what's wrong in the world. This need for immediate gratification, in this case by passing judgement so you can now move on to the next topic and not bother with this again.

    It's just silly.
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:02PM (#18903927)
    "He made up a death-list and talked about it to friends"

    You say that like that's not batshit motherfucking crazy. There's about an ocean of difference between writing some depressive paper that doesn't threaten a specific person, and making a goddamn death list. I'm not sure I'd use such an extreme situation to attack the administration in TFA
  • Troll? (Score:2, Insightful)

    by zoomshorts ( 137587 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:03PM (#18903951)
    People who would MOD me as troll, are Exactly the same type of people
    who would have a child arrested for a 'disturbing' paper.

    Many of the framers of the U.S. Constitution wrote 'disturbing' papers.

    Such MOdders are the exact reason people take the law into their own hands.

    Must have been a teacher.
  • by c6gunner ( 950153 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:09PM (#18904063) Homepage
    Yeah, because things have gotten SO much worse since the 1940's, when all Japanese Americans were locked up for no real reason.

    Or since the 1800's, when the sheriff was whoever had the biggest gun, and the law was whatever he said it was.

    Or in the early 1700's, when the Brits owned and controlled everything, slavery was status quo, and a whole race of people was considered to be sub-human, and treated accordingly.

    Yep, things have really gone downhill in the US. With this sort of track-record, who knows what could happen next!
  • Re:The Essay? (Score:4, Insightful)

    by bkr1_2k ( 237627 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:09PM (#18904085)
    Have you ever read any Edgar Allan Poe? I'm betting if you were educated in the USA, you have, or were at least supposed to have read some of his work. He's easily as twisted, though less graphicly so, and he's considered one of the premiere American writers.

    I've read conflicting things that say this was a creative writing assignment and an essay. The two are not synonymous and this small excerpt proves absolutely nothing about the kid's mental stability. It's not even necessarily indicative of a lack of any stability. Plenty of people write about gore all the time. Have you ever seen any movies like Halloween, Hellraiser, Friday the 13th?

    Effectively this kid did nothing more than have bad timing with what he wrote. The teacher went way overboard in his/her reaction and should be reprimanded for such behavior. An appropriate response would have been to call the kid and his parents in for a counselling session with the teacher and explain why that type of writing is inappropriate and find out if there is a reason behind the writing. Arrest is completely unwaranted and just shows how ridiculous we have become as a society. Fear is never a good reason for any action unless it's specifically self defense.
  • by drinkypoo ( 153816 ) <drink@hyperlogos.org> on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:14PM (#18904163) Homepage Journal

    Saying that those people paid the price of freedom is NOT going to win you any friends.

    I need freedom more than I need friends.

    Most police officers are rather down to earth, they KNOW the world.

    Most police officers are glorified ticket writers, and they don't know shit.

    Only detectives need brains, all other cops simply follow procedure, on which they have been repeatedly drilled.

    The military and the paramilitary organizations work basically on the same principle. You have a few chiefs, who are smart, driven, et cetera. Then you have a whole bunch of peons, who are there to do their bidding. One of the selection criteria is their tendency to do what they are told. This is valuable from a chain-of-command standpoint but it is counterproductive from the standpoint of justice.

    For them to make an arrest and for it not to be all settled easily alarms me.

    You have obviously been brainwashed into believing that people wouldn't be a suspect if they weren't guilty.

    You clearly do not understand the principles of justice; chief among them the concept of innocent until proven guilty, without which there is no justice - because you can't prove a negative.

    You are part of the problem in this country. Personally, I don't believe anything the government tells me, and very little of what the media tells me. History has shown that this is only pragmatism, not paranoia.

  • by Zatoichi007 ( 910559 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:17PM (#18904235) Homepage
    tomstdenis wrote: in this case would it have been so hard to pull the kid aside with the parents and ask what's up? Instead of going all omgbbq!!!!111oneCRAZIES over it?

    Yes, actually it would. Because if it does turn out this kid is the next mass murderer/psycho/rapist/etc., guess who gets sued into oblivion by the victims' families (and their attorneys who get 1/3+ of any $$$)?...that's right: the teacher, school, and district because they should have seen it coming. This is just the school doing a CYA as a result of our litigious society.
  • by ncohafmuta ( 577957 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:18PM (#18904243)
    I don't see how a criminal charge against him for a non-directed threatening essay doesn't violate his freedom of speech. If that was the case, everybody shouting at a protest would get charged for disorderly conduct no matter what.

    And do they really think that 'charging' him rather than seeing if he needs help is the best way to go about this. Charging him with a crime won't do crap. If he needs help, this does nothing. It's like hitting your kid for being bad without understanding why he was bad or teaching him why he shouldn't do it.

    -Tony
  • by MrNougat ( 927651 ) <ckratsch@noSPAm.gmail.com> on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:21PM (#18904323)

    On the off chance the kid is a nut job I guess you need to check him out. I'm not sure you need to arrest him.


    Thought police?
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:23PM (#18904351)
    They're only "straw men" in your mind, and because you don't like them. Had you bothered to look closely, you'd realize that his points are quite valid, albeit intentionally absurd. But they most certainly relate to your points, which are also valid, and only slightly less absurd.

    Freedom as you describe it cannot exist in concert with civilization as we know it. That is not because of your points, but because of the ease with which the freedoms you pontificate about are extended to their extreme.

    And please do not even attempt to say it wouldn't happen.
  • by drinkypoo ( 153816 ) <drink@hyperlogos.org> on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:24PM (#18904371) Homepage Journal

    I think if kids were reminded more about life after school they probably would level out and the prima donna cool cliques would get a clue.

    I don't think it works that way for the same reason that little kids cry when they drop their ice cream cone. Nothing truly bad has ever happened to them. By the same token, school is [ostensibly] the most important thing you've ever done as a child. Your parents make a bigger deal out of it than almost anything else. And it's the most influential social scene they've ever been a part of.

    School is simply presented as the most important thing in their lives. If it isn't, we should stop treating it that way. If it is, then maybe WE should take OUR roles (as citizens, parents, educators, whatever we are) in education more seriously. We should actually work to stop the bullying, and I don't care if the bullies are athletes or not (but the schools certainly do.) We should treat children like humans, not like animals. They have needs and desires and hopes and fears like the rest of us and to dismiss them is to do them a great disservice.

  • by dosquatch ( 924618 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:25PM (#18904387) Journal

    Given this as a benchmark, I'd like to suggest that the world keep a very close eye on Mr. Vincent Furnier and Mr. Brian Warner. They have written and published extensively on some very disturbing topics, including drug use, violence against women, violence in families, violence in general, sexual devience, and school bombings. These are the sort of psychopaths that shouldn't be allowed to roam the streets freely.

    Given the social climate, and the impressionable minds that such writings might reach, I think it better if they were arrested as soon as possible. Who knows how much of a following they might be able to generate, or what horrendous acts such followers might carry out?

    Please, if you see either of these men, let your local authorities know right away.

    You should also know that they frequently travel under the aliases Alice Cooper and Marilyn Manson.

  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:29PM (#18904461)
    We don't have packed stadiums to watch 14 year olds toss a football around, etc.

    That's because you don't have packed stadiums to see 24 year-olds toss a football around either.
    Lucky for you. Seriously.
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:30PM (#18904471)
    Please go back to school and learn about paragraphs and punctuation.

    Jesus.
  • Re:The Essay? (Score:5, Insightful)

    by bitslinger_42 ( 598584 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:38PM (#18904609)

    Sounds like a nut job? To me, he sounds like a teen following the directions of the assignment and trying to determine where the limits lie. While not as well executed, Lee's essay has elements that are similar to sections of T.S. Elliot's The Wasteland [bartleby.com], the drug advocacy of Alan Ginsberg, the poetry of Sylvia Plath. Literature is filled with dead people we now refer to as artists and legends who became thus because they explored the dark edges of humanity. Oedipus Rex is all about incest and patricide, the works of Shakespeare are filled with violence, sex, and death. So, take this background, a bright student, and an assignment that instructs the students not to censor themselves, and just what did you expect to come out? No poets get recognized for writing about happy puppies and cute kittens.

    Add to that, the only text from the essay I've seen has been excerpted out of context. If I just give you this text "And ate the fellow, raw.", what would you think the poem was about? Perhaps a bit from Silence of the Lambs? A quote from Penthouse Letters? A story about eating octopus [boingboing.net]? Nope. That's from Emily Dickinson's "In the garden" [cuny.edu]. Context is key to meaning.

    Should the teacher have done something? Probably. Should someone have talked with Lee to find out if he really had violent tendencies? Sure. Should they have charged the kid with a crime for following, perhaps to the logical extreme, the explicit instructions on the assignment? Definitely not.

  • by arbarbonif ( 307596 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:39PM (#18904633)
    That is interesting. I basically just go on the assumption that everyone is a fuckin nut job. I know I am.

    I think the problem is that you assume 'fuckin nut job' is a bad thing. You shouldn't be so quick to judge.
  • by 'nother poster ( 700681 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:40PM (#18904661)
    It. Have "it" removed. Remember, you need to dehumanize the enemy to make it easier for the panicy masses destroy them.
  • by operagost ( 62405 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:41PM (#18904689) Homepage Journal
    They don't allow those in school, either.
  • by CaffeineAddict2001 ( 518485 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:43PM (#18904731)
    Yes, why can't you have a dozen 13 year old wives rolling you joints while you shoot heroin in the nude with a transvestite prostitute you smuggled out of Somalia?

    Cause thankfully there are laws against people like that being in my society.
  • by miskatonic alumnus ( 668722 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:46PM (#18904781)
    Oh come on. I did the same kind of shit when I was in high school. How do kids react when it first starts to dawn on them that maybe the powers that be don't have their best interests at heart, that most people are liars and hypocrites, and that there is little real justice in the world? Some use drugs and alcohol. Some bury their heads in books. Some go out with their peers and fuck like rabbits. And some write sadistic essays and death lists. It's a part of growing up. Don't read too much into it.
  • by aepervius ( 535155 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:46PM (#18904785)
    OK. It remind me of the hate law in the EU. People were screaming that such things would not happen in the US, censorship, calling blood on the EU.

    And now I elarn today that you can be arrested if you write something which is troubling somebody, and promptly a 18 old was arrested for doing so.

    So... Who is the more fucked up ? One country which arrest people which want to cremate/kill/genocide other folk, or police which arrest student for writing an essay calling for killing having sex with body and drug ?

    Sound as bad each other IMHO. At least here in Europe we do not have the ILLUSION of having free speech, whereas on the other side of the atlantic, beside free speech being written on a piece of paper, you are as bad or as good off as us...
  • by rajafarian ( 49150 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:53PM (#18904933)
    One has nothing to do with the other.

    But at least now you know the answer to your original Why question: Because the person who responded to your post can't tell the difference but he can still vote.
  • by drinkypoo ( 153816 ) <drink@hyperlogos.org> on Friday April 27, 2007 @02:54PM (#18904973) Homepage Journal

    So, you were bullied because you were disruptive. I had a friend with ADD or ADHD or whatever the hell, and he had the same problem.

    I think that most kids diagnosed with ADD etc are actually just smart kids who need more to do.

    Children should be challenged and to assign them to classes based on their age is convenient but does not serve their educational needs. Nor their social ones.

    However, our school system is based on a German design intended to produce good factory workers. It mostly teaches children to line up in rows, sit still, and follow orders unquestioningly. So really the whole thing is broken and I think anyone who sends their children to a public school is guilty of child abuse.

  • by Goaway ( 82658 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:00PM (#18905075) Homepage
    I don't think any government bigger than a community government should restrict anything that doesn't harm anyone (or have potential for very significant harm... building a nuke in your garage doesn't harm anyone, but the potential's pretty significant). I don't think any government, period, should restrict anything that happens inside your home, with the same caveat as above.

    So you're still not letting people do what they want, if you're stopping them from building a nuke in their basement. You're still drawing a line, saying "you can do this, but you can't do that".

    So you agree that certain actions should not be allowed. You can no longer argue that people should be free to do what they want, because you don't want to allow that. You're basically back to arguing for each individual action whether it should or should not be allowed.

    Several of your original examples easily fall under your "potential for very significant harm". It is only if you do not bother to follow the larger consequences of actions on a societal level that you would not see that.
  • by g2devi ( 898503 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:10PM (#18905219)
    Stephen King perspective on Mr Cho's writings:
    http://www.ew.com/ew/article/0,,20036014,00.html [ew.com]
    Basically, what someone writes says little about their state of mind.

    I agree 100% with Mr King and add that many people write in order to understand why people do the things they do. They want to see things through their eyes and live through the experiences that lead up to a "nut job end" so that ultimately they can become better more compassionate human beings or better able to see the warning signs when people start to get lost or just to form their own opinions instead of parroting the reaction they're "supposed to have".

    The last thing we need to do is to discourage this sort of wisdom seeking. The world is already too full of superficial reactionaries that mindlessly see the world through safe "society approved"[TM] labels like "nut job", "terrorist", "communist", "capitalist", "fanatic", "cultist", ....

  • by C0rinthian ( 770164 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:10PM (#18905245)
    Okay, so you 'expressed your individuality' by dressing like every other goth kid in high school. Guess what, you dressed a certain way to fit in with your peers. Congrats, you're just like everyone else. I bet you read Gaiman and Lovecraft too, right?

    Don't worry, I did it too. After a year or two I realized the irony of the situation and found great humor in it.
  • by fitten ( 521191 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:23PM (#18905435)

    But I would love to see someplace that was really free.


    But you can... just look towards Africa. There are places in Africa where you can do ANYTHING you want as long as you can back it up.
  • Please, this law is not unique in that it leaves room for interpretation. Let's focus on the improper implementation of the law in this case, lest we be required to flesh out all laws to unintelligible legalese.
  • Re:The Essay? (Score:3, Insightful)

    by electrosoccertux ( 874415 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:37PM (#18905693)

    Even then, there's a difference between a work of fiction and a threat. You would have to understand the references made in the work to know if it is a threat or a work of fiction.
    What do you all think is more disturbing? That a student wrote a potentially violent, threatening paper; or that nobody can find the essay in question to decide for ourselves?

    Why would the authorities be afraid of releasing the essay? They only would if they had something to lose by releasing it. What could they have to lose? Their credibility?

    These sort of holes in news stories are what concern me the most. How hard would it have been to quote a suspicious section?
  • by Andrew Nagy ( 985144 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:43PM (#18905797) Homepage Journal
    Just because the Bible mentions those things doesn't mean it endorses those things.

    Big difference.
  • by Fifty Points ( 878668 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @03:45PM (#18905817)
    I seriously doubt anyone in the US is in grave danger of having too much freedom.
  • Liar. (Score:3, Insightful)

    by FatSean ( 18753 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @04:02PM (#18906095) Homepage Journal
    There certainly are copies of the Bible and other religious texts in public school libraries. Sorry to burst your "I'm a poor oppressed religionist" bubble.
  • by norman619 ( 947520 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @04:10PM (#18906241)
    This is hilarious!!!! So he got arrested over this? Come on now... When I was a kid I wrote a pretty dark piece in my English class and was praised for my use of metaphor and vivid imagery. They didn't call the cops on me or send me to see the school shrink for a heart to heart. They took my piece for what it was. This essay was just him venting. If they think this is bad they'd most likely die of fright if they were able to read the REAL thoughts of the students. For the most part I feel this kids essay was a critique of his school and society. Nothing here should be raising any red flags. The stuff he put to paper is the same stuff kids say when they talk to each other. This poor kid has learned that when someone asks him to be open it really means "only say nice things." How pathetic.
  • Re:Understandable? (Score:3, Insightful)

    by dosquatch ( 924618 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @04:16PM (#18906291) Journal

    If you can imagine a situation where the life of somebody else is worth less to you than your own happiness, you are not mentally fit to carry a weapon.

    Happiness can take a squat. If "you" pose a grave threat to me, or even moreso my family, then "your" life is worth less to me than a sack of beans. That ain't creative writing either, that's what we call "truth", Bubba. I want to be very clear about that, right up front, so you don't have to scratch your head wondering. I find you endangering the ones I love, and I will end you. No second thoughts. No remorse. All clear on that? Good.

    I have bought and sold quite a few guns over the years. I currently own several. I'm a pretty decent shot. I target shoot regularly, because I enjoy doing so as a hobby, and not for any other particular reason like home defense, job requirement, or hunting.

    I've played a fair amount of what seems to be considered "violent" video games including GTA, Wolfenstein, Lethal Enforcer, Call of Duty, so on an so forth. I've watched a fair amount of violent television programming and movies. I've read some violent and disturbing books, including everybody's favorite footnote "Catcher in the Rye".

    I have never entertained the notion of doing harm to another. I have never pointed a weapon any more dangerous than a SuperSoaker at another human being. I hope on hope I am never put in that position. I, and millions of others, are safe an consciencous gun owners. You suggest that I should not be if I can imagine a situation where another's life is worth less than... something. I refer you back to my first paragraph as testament to my "imagination", and repectfully point out that it doesn't take that much.

    All the same, I don't think I'll be letting you take my guns away today. Thanks anyway.

  • by prelelat ( 201821 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @04:19PM (#18906305)
    I agree with you, a teacher being concerned should be taken seriously. As an english teacher receiving a paper from someone can be an insite into someone. The teacher probably has seen hundreds of papers with a simular topic to write about so having one be concerning is a warning flag.

    Now the warning flag goes off you don't go have a meeting about disaplinary actions. You have a meeting with the school counceler. You get the student help, if help is refused then you might want to seek some other means to communicate with the student or talk to the parents. If this doesn't work then maybe escalate it higher.

    It sounds like the student in this case was not even told about the concerns in the paper, I'm sure this has to do with the recent school shooting. I mean a school teacher felt there was something wrong and had them removed. Good decision, at that point there is no need to involve the police because someone is disturbed. No one was specificly threatened in this case. But the student wasn't even talked to, he was just treated as a criminal.

    Its a sad day indeed.
    If your writing your personal feelings and handing them in I believe that you are reaching out. The teacher pulled away from the student and betrayed them. Thats the saddest thing you could do. Giving the student some one on one time might have been all he needed. I'm sure that there are millions of students that have gone out and wrote things that could be taken the same way this one was. Only a small percentage of that percentage ever escalate their fealings in the real world. Most of those might have been able to get help if the person reached out to them.
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @04:26PM (#18906337)
    One student's killing spree and we look at this person writings and we all now could predict all human behavior.
    Mr. Cho may have written in a disturbing way but there are many other people that have written more disturbing writings and they are famous and rich. A good example is Stephen King. I read many books from him and if it wasn't for his notoriety now we would have arrested him too. There are many writers that write "disturbing", creepy, and strange matters but does that make them killers?
    However, we need to look at person's personality and character if they write any "unusual" things as to ascertain if they are really dangerous to society or just have an unusual, macabre, and creative outlet. Most of the people who write this stuff are just doing it for an "creative" outlet and are no harm to no one.
    We should look at the person's personality and character and not what they write before we run to the authority and detain unreasonably.
  • by Anonymous Coward on Friday April 27, 2007 @05:45PM (#18906397)
    So when God sent an angel to wipe out the first born of every Egyptian, or commanded the Hebrews to commit ethnic cleansing on Canaanites in order to occupy their land, that wasn't an endorsement? May I ask, then, what is?

    Let me guess: whatever commands or actions by God that happen to be convenient to use for proselytizing. We can safely ignore the rest and chalk it up to "intrepretation."

    When my angel goes in front of you, and brings you to the Amorites, the Hittites, the Perizzites, the Canaanites, the Hivites, and the Jebusites, and I blot them out, you shall not bow down to their gods, or worship them, or follow their practices, but you shall utterly demolish them and break their pillars in pieces (Exodus 23.23-24).

    When Yahweh your God brings you into the land that you are about to enter and occupy, and he clears away many nations before you -- the Hittites, the Girgashites, the Amorites, the Canaanites, the Perizzites, the Hivites...and when Yahweh your God gives them over to you...you must utterly destroy them...Show them no mercy...For you are a people holy to Yahweh your God; Yahweh your God has chosen you out of all the peoples on earth to be his people, his treasured possession (Deuteronomy 7.1-11; see also 9.1-5; 11.8-9, 23, 31-32).

    But as for the towns of these peoples that Yahweh your God is giving you as an inheritance, you must not let anything that breathes remain alive. You shall annihilate them--the Hittites and the Amorites, the Canaanites and the Perizzites, the Hivites and the Jebusites--just as Yahweh your God has commanded, so that they may not teach you to do all the abhorrent things that they do for their gods, and you thus sin against Yahweh your God (Deuteronomy 20.16-18).

    Three different passages, from two different books, and and the same message from the mouth of God commanding the death of every man, woman, and child. Let me guess: it's taken "out of context," right? Or perhaps the message has been adulterated through man--in which case, what standard of measure do you have to claim any other aspect of the Bible hasn't been also.

    I know: whatever happens to be convenient to believe.
  • by asninn ( 1071320 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @05:52PM (#18906493)
    Outside of the "13 year old" and the "smuggled out" part, I don't really have a problem with any of the above, actually. What's wrong with having a dozen partners? What's wrong with rolling joints? What's wrong with shooting heroin (in a criminal sense, not as a medical condition that should be treated)? What's wrong with being in a nude? What's wrong with transvestites? What's wrong with prostitution, as long as it's voluntarily and nobody's forced to do anything they don't want to do (if people *are*, that's bad, of course, but in that case, it's bad no matter whether what they're forced to do is prostitute themselves or something else). And finally, what's wrong with people from Somalia?

    As long as everyone involved is an adult and as long as everything's done with the informed consent of everyone involved, I frankly don't see why you should have a right to dictate what others can or can't do. I assume, based on your nickname, that you enjoy coffee. I'm also going to guess (without any basis) that you're heterosexual and not celibate (or that you wouldn't be if you had a girlfriend in case you don't have one). How would you feel if I came along and told you that in "my society", doing depraved things like drinking coffee and having missionary-style sex with your girlfriend are (or, at the very least, should be) illegal? Wouldn't you feel that this is an intrusion into your private matters - that as long as your girlfriend wants to have sex with you, there's no reason why the two of you shouldn't, and that whether you drink coffee or not is noone's business but your own?

    Maybe you think that that's not the same, but if you do, you couldn't be more wrong. Freedom is always the freedom of others.
  • by Fulcrum of Evil ( 560260 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @06:24PM (#18906731)
    Who cares about law enforcement? The question is whether he's broken any laws and, the last I heard, writing something disturbing isn't illegal. This is just a bunch of panicky idiots overreacting like they always do. God help us, the morons are running the place.
  • by laddiebuck ( 868690 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @08:03PM (#18907339)
    Mr. Kerouac's idealism is commendable, but not entirely accurate. These misfits of popular lore can both advance and detract humanity. The effects may cancel out, but my own view is that most simply have no effect, being external, and that a very small minority are harmful or helpful. I am sure that the recent murderer at Virginia Tech was a "misfit". So while there is something to what you quote, it is laughably naive.
  • Have you read the Bible?

    Not every word of it, no. I actually intend to eventually, even though I consider it to be mostly fiction.

    However, rape was never condoned or commanded.


    Genesis 19

    19:1 And there came two angels to Sodom at even; and Lot sat in the gate of Sodom: and Lot seeing them rose up to meet them; and he bowed himself with his face toward the ground;
    19:2 And he said, Behold now, my lords, turn in, I pray you, into your servant's house, and tarry all night, and wash your feet, and ye shall rise up early, and go on your ways. And they said, Nay; but we will abide in the street all night.
    19:3 And he pressed upon them greatly; and they turned in unto him, and entered into his house; and he made them a feast, and did bake unleavened bread, and they did eat.
    19:4 But before they lay down, the men of the city, even the men of Sodom, compassed the house round, both old and young, all the people from every quarter:
    19:5 And they called unto Lot, and said unto him, Where are the men which came in to thee this night? bring them out unto us, that we may know them.
    19:6 And Lot went out at the door unto them, and shut the door after him,
    19:7 And said, I pray you, brethren, do not so wickedly.
    19:8 Behold now, I have two daughters which have not known man; let me, I pray you, bring them out unto you, and do ye to them as is good in your eyes: only unto these men do nothing; for therefore came they under the shadow of my roof.



    Anyway you might want to take notice that hte New Testament is very different. Yes, I believe in both, but something did indeed change at a certain point,

    Aaah, the old "The New Testament establishes a new covenant with God's Children" line. Maybe, maybe not. Nonetheless, if we accept that the Old Testament is indeed the Word of God, we see that the God of the Bible did indeed command every - or nearly every - manner of atrocity imaginable.

    and it's not fair to take certain things out of context for the purpose of bashing.

    Who's bashing? I don't care much about the Bible or the God of Christianity either way. I think it's all a bunch of bollocks. I was just adding some support for an earlier comment that suggests that as example of writing about evil acts, the Bible is about as bad as it gets. Should we put this kid from Chicago in jail for what he wrote, when the holy text of one of the world's most common religions shows their God endorsing such evil? I think that was the more the original point...

  • by bhiestand ( 157373 ) on Friday April 27, 2007 @11:56PM (#18909097) Journal
    Assuming the post a bit above yours was actually the real essay, the kid already said he was joining the marines! I say "problem solved", if there was even a problem to begin with. If he really is a psychopath he'll be a war hero sooner or later. If not, he'll get his chance at the stab, shoot, kill game and then he'll find out whether he really enjoys it or not. Chances are he'll piss his pants and cower behind the nearest cover, but time will tell. Either way, I doubt a psychologist would deem him mentally unstable or unfit to own a weapon, and I don't think he really wrote enough to even warrant informing anybody, although I suppose the parents should have the opportunity to know about and read the essay.
  • by skeeterbug ( 960559 ) on Saturday April 28, 2007 @05:09AM (#18910207)

    Sure it does, if you consider rape, murder, incest, slavery, ethnic killings, torture, etc. to be "virtues."


    oh stop it. the bible records actual events and - shock and horror - people do bad things. that's why they are recorded.

    the bible doesn't instruct anyone to rape other people, murder other people, commit incest (adam and eve's close family didn't have much choice, if that is how it went down) and torture others. it doesn't teach these things as "virtues."

    nor does it teach dishonesty as a virtue.

    there was a time, long, long ago, where god worked through the physical nation israel and he did use them to execute evil peoples and communities (propel them into their yet future resurrection to learn how not be evil so they can be allowed to live forever). god never taught any person to go out and kill others based on their own desire to do so. never.

    agree or disagree, fine. but don't be dishonest.

Genetics explains why you look like your father, and if you don't, why you should.

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